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(Sing...Zing....n Feel.....)
Har roz chale aate ho,afsaanon mein hamaare.....
Dhoondoon tumhe main kaise, Veeranon mein hammare..
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Har roz chale aate ho,afsaanon mein hamaare.....
Kahte ho ki chaha nahi, chahat se kabhi tumko......
Khud naam liya phirte ho, anzaanon mein hamaare...
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Har roz chale aate ho,afsaanon mein hamaare.....
Sab kuch lutaya tum pe, har pal tumhi ko pooja...
Ab naam de do apna, deewano mein hamaare.....
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Har roz chale aate ho,afsaanon mein hamaare.....
Dhoondoon tumhe main kaise, Veeranon mein hammare..
...Mere is nazm ke rooh me aap tab, shumaar ho sakte hain, Jab aap..dabe hothon se ise gun-gunaaye.....
ReplyDelete...Ghazal ke har ..antre ke pahle line...ko..aap apne andaaz mein kayi baar dohra sakte hai.....
Hope.....main apnne ghazal ke sahaare aap sab tak pahunch paaon....
will luv to...have ur precious comments...
kuch dabdaba hai teri ankhone ke kinaron me,dubkar kho hi jate hai, bas intezar hai hume kab basoge tum ankhon me hamare...... :)..added a line to above.Just one word- " lovely"!
ReplyDeleteVery nice ...,I enjoyed all of them.Keep going
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